1Read the question first and identify the thinking and language it requires
2Read the model for meaning before highlighting anything
3Annotate what each part does
4Close the model and write a response to a new question using the same useful moves
Worked classroom example
Question: Why did the plant in brighter light grow more? Model: “The plant received more light, which increased photosynthesis when other conditions were suitable. This produced more material for growth.” Compare with: “It grew more because it had more light.”
A model to discuss and adapt to your class.
02 · The classroom routine
Teach the move
Prepare · 5 minutes
Choose a short model matched to the task and criteria. Prepare a weaker version with one important element missing.
1
Read the question first and identify the thinking and language it requires.
2
Read the model for meaning before highlighting anything.
3
Annotate what each part does: answer, evidence, explanation or qualification. Compare with the weaker version.
4
Close the model and write a response to a new question using the same useful moves.
EAL upgrade
Remove colour coding and labels. Ask learners to evaluate their own answer using the question and criteria.
Keep the subject challenge. Offer one model, visual or language prompt where needed, then check a fresh independent response.
03 · A plan for the next lesson
Try it tomorrow
Prepare one task
Choose a short model matched to the task and criteria. Prepare a weaker version with one important element missing.
Model and rehearse
Read the question first and identify the thinking and language it requires. Read the model for meaning before highlighting anything.
Collect evidence
Check the fresh response for the explanatory mechanism. A learner who copies the model accurately has not yet demonstrated transfer.
Next time
Remove colour coding and labels. Ask learners to evaluate their own answer using the question and criteria.
What to look for
Check the fresh response for the explanatory mechanism. A learner who copies the model accurately has not yet demonstrated transfer.
04 · Words you can use
Teacher language
Adapt these prompts to the task and your learners.
Launch
Our purpose is: Help learners see how an answer earns its meaning and quality, then transfer those moves to a fresh response.
Probe the thinking
Which words explain the mechanism? What does the shorter answer leave for the reader to guess?
Check independently
Try the new case on your own. Show the detail or reasoning that supports your answer.
Hand over
Which support do you still need, and which part can you now do independently?
05 · Keep the move, change the context
Across subjects
Transfer 1
History: distinguish a claim from evidence and an explanation of significance.
Transfer 2
Maths: compare a correct result with a solution that also makes its reasoning clear.
Adjust language support
Use a small word bank, visuals and partner rehearsal when needed. Extend with precise explanations and qualifications. Judge the support from the response to this task.
Keep the strategy. Change the subject.
Four classroom examples
Use the task, response and evidence check as a starting point for your curriculum.
Science
Set up the task
Annotate a model explanation of balanced forces: claim, diagram evidence and qualification.
Possible student response
Equal opposite forces give zero resultant force, but the diagram alone does not establish whether the object is stationary.
Check the learning
Remove the model and ask for an explanation of unequal forces.
Humanities
Set up the task
Annotate a model paragraph about a source’s purpose and limits.
Possible student response
The direct address and patriotic slogan support a persuasive purpose; they do not establish everyone’s response.
Check the learning
Ask learners to identify the evidence and the exact limit on the claim.
English
Set up the task
Annotate where a model interpretation moves from quotation to an explanation of effect.
Possible student response
The repeated “alone” keeps returning attention to isolation, making loneliness seem persistent.
Check the learning
Ask why the interpretation needs the quoted detail.
Maths
Set up the task
Annotate a model solution comparing fractions: equivalent forms, comparison and conclusion.
Possible student response
Three quarters is nine twelfths and two thirds is eight twelfths; therefore three quarters is greater.
Check the learning
Use a new pair and check the reason for finding equivalent fractions.