Build a Paragraph Frame
Put a current subject question on the board. Draft one answer together, then remove one support and ask learners to try a fresh example independently.
Worked classroom example
Geography
For Build a Paragraph Frame in Geography, set a prompt about population change. Ask learners to write a sentence that makes the logical relationship explicit with a suitable linker. Model a short response with the subject evidence visible; have learners underline the part that meets the criterion and revise one vague or unsupported phrase.
Use this example to make the language move visible. Select subject content appropriate to the class’s age and prior knowledge.
Teaching sequence
- Provide a frame that names the thinking the sentence must express, leaving the key subject idea for learners to supply.
- Model one response with accurate evidence. Invite learners to rehearse, then complete the frame using their own evidence.
- Offer a second prompt with less support and check that learners can make the same move independently.
Materials and purpose
a current subject question
A visible model and one manageable writing move help learners communicate their subject thinking with increasing independence.
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Prepare
Use a current subject question. Choose a second example that checks the same language move without repeating the original answer.
Classroom task
Put a current subject question on the board. Draft one answer together, then remove one support and ask learners to try a fresh example independently.
Check independent transfer
Offer a second prompt with less support and check that learners can make the same move independently.
Collect a response on fresh content. Note what was achieved without the model, partner or teacher prompt, then choose one next teaching step.
Teacher language
Teacher language
Which part of the success criterion can you see in this sentence?
“What does your reader need to understand at this point?”
“Which revision makes the relationship between your ideas clearer?”
Respond to the learner
Identify one successful meaning or language choice. Ask about one gap, allow thinking time, then invite a revision. Check the revised move again on a fresh example.
Adjust support and challenge
Offer a brief model, useful vocabulary and partner rehearsal where needed. Keep the subject goal; reduce one prompt on fresh content and record what was independent.
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More support
Use oral rehearsal, a brief model and a limited sentence frame. Remove one support for the fresh writing task. Allow familiar-language notes or another response mode when checking subject understanding.
Greater independence
Change the content, evidence or audience. Remove the completed model and ask learners to explain a choice. Increase subject complexity only when it fits the curriculum and prior knowledge.
Choose the next step
If subject meaning is insecure, reteach the concept. If the concept is understood but the English is unclear, model one useful language relationship and invite a fresh response.