Revision: One Reader Goal

Worked classroom example

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Worked example

Revise a process note so another student can repeat the technique safely.

Use this example to make the language move visible. Select subject content appropriate to the class’s age and prior knowledge.

Teaching sequence

1. Choose one success feature that matters for the current task.
2. Learners read their draft as a reader and mark one place to improve.
3. They make the change and annotate how it helps the reader.

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Prepare

Use a draft and a reader-focused checklist. Choose a second example that checks the same language move without repeating the original answer.

Classroom task

Learners revise a draft for one purpose such as clarity, evidence or sequence, then explain one change.

Check independent transfer

They make the change and annotate how it helps the reader.

Collect a response on fresh content. Note what was achieved without the model, partner or teacher prompt, then choose one next teaching step.

Teacher language

Teacher language

What did you change to help your reader?

Respond to the learner

Identify one successful meaning or language choice. Ask about one gap, allow thinking time, then invite a revision. Check the revised move again on a fresh example.

Adjust support and challenge

Offer a brief model, useful vocabulary and partner rehearsal where needed. Keep the subject goal; reduce one prompt on fresh content and record what was independent.

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More support

Use oral rehearsal, a brief model and a limited sentence frame. Remove one support for the fresh writing task. Allow familiar-language notes or another response mode when checking subject understanding.

Greater independence

Change the content, evidence or audience. Remove the completed model and ask learners to explain a choice. Increase subject complexity only when it fits the curriculum and prior knowledge.

Choose the next step

If subject meaning is insecure, reteach the concept. If the concept is understood but the English is unclear, model one useful language relationship and invite a fresh response.