Edit the Verb
Learners replace vague verbs with accurate subject verbs and check whether the meaning has changed.
Worked classroom example
Science
Change “the liquid gets hot” to a precise description of heating and evaporation.
Use this example to make the language move visible. Select subject content appropriate to the class’s age and prior knowledge.
Teaching sequence
- Select a short draft with verbs such as does, gets or is.
- Pairs suggest a more exact verb and check that the evidence supports it.
- Writers revise the sentence and reread for accuracy.
Materials and purpose
a draft with vague or repeated verbs
Precise verbs carry important meaning in many subject explanations.
Try it in your next lesson
Prepare
Use a draft with vague or repeated verbs. Choose a second example that checks the same language move without repeating the original answer.
Classroom task
Learners replace vague verbs with accurate subject verbs and check whether the meaning has changed.
Check independent transfer
Writers revise the sentence and reread for accuracy.
Collect a response on fresh content. Note what was achieved without the model, partner or teacher prompt, then choose one next teaching step.
Teacher language
Teacher language
Does the new verb say exactly what happened?
“What does your reader need to understand at this point?”
“Which revision makes the relationship between your ideas clearer?”
Respond to the learner
Identify one successful meaning or language choice. Ask about one gap, allow thinking time, then invite a revision. Check the revised move again on a fresh example.
Adjust support and challenge
Offer a brief model, useful vocabulary and partner rehearsal where needed. Keep the subject goal; reduce one prompt on fresh content and record what was independent.
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More support
Use oral rehearsal, a brief model and a limited sentence frame. Remove one support for the fresh writing task. Allow familiar-language notes or another response mode when checking subject understanding.
Greater independence
Change the content, evidence or audience. Remove the completed model and ask learners to explain a choice. Increase subject complexity only when it fits the curriculum and prior knowledge.
Choose the next step
If subject meaning is insecure, reteach the concept. If the concept is understood but the English is unclear, model one useful language relationship and invite a fresh response.